my stuff

[[M4D]FULL_METAL]

i dont give a fuck on what you think about it, but here it is
and there is more to come

Dedicated to Amy Hyatt

The day you leave
We will all be in grief
For a good friend has gone
For we have been friends for so long

Congratulations on getting into ADFA
When you are gone, we will all miss ya
The times we have spent together
Will be with us forever

There were the good times and the bad
Where we have made you mad
We are sorry for the trouble
Which lifted like a bubble

Cadets won’t be the same
For you are not there to keep us tame
To the MT’s you were like fame
You kept them from going insane

You taught cadets to sail
They listened to you when you said to bail
Your leadership will never fail

From the cadets that will miss you the most
They will always say a toast
“To Petty Officer Amy Hyatt, we give you this toast. In remembrance in your days of cadets.”

There are bets
That will say you will become what you want
And you will be the best

Id like to say’s
Good luck Amy and I hope you have many great days

[[DRuG]Mortal]

nice poetriesss, but who is Amy Hyatt?

[[M4D]FULL_METAL]

its one of my friends who left to go into the RAN9royal australian navy)

and time for another piece of art

From the skies so blue
I came to you
With the love of evermore

The skies I flew
Just for you
With the love of the un-dieing

I fought my way
Just to say
That I love you

I traveled far and near
Just to hear
Your beautiful voice again

I will always be there
Just so you’re aware
That somebody loves you
For evermore


this was my second thing ever do0ne

[[SiK]DemonSeed]

Cause you said Navy Ill sponsor this post with a..............




WOOT!!!


Nice poetry btw.

[[M4D]FULL_METAL]

i kno i havnt posted stuff in a while, but idc

this is what im goin to give to my gf tomorrow night
(the date now 21/12/07)

when we first met, we were just friends
then we ended up helping each other to the ends
you were the girl i always adored

you have had some rough times before
with jerks and idiots who always wanted more
you hoped they would waken up
in the end you ended up satin NUP

you left them for someone who was there for you
the kinda person who waits for what you wanna do
some who was and is there to help

let it be known
i will never leave you alone
you are the sun in my day
i wish you could always stay

and the fact that i love you
through and through

[[SiK]Grim_Reeper]

Far out man if your thinking this shiz up, you need a poetry competition of some sort, it aint very bad at all

[eNathan]

Very creative shit there, you have talent for expressing your thoughts. I've written a peice of poetry or two myself, but I get discouraged when it starts sounding too damn "poetic" (aka, fruity, gay, what else?), or when I can't find good analagies and metaphores to indirectly explain things.

Highly impressive work. #65+++

[[M4D]FULL_METAL]

Very creative shit there, you have talent for expressing your thoughts. I've written a peice of poetry or two myself, but I get discouraged when it starts sounding too damn "poetic" (aka, fruity, gay, what else?), or when I can't find good analagies and metaphores to indirectly explain things.

Highly impressive work. #65+++

post it, i give back my thoughts of your work, even if it is good or bad, the whole point is to see what people think

[eNathan]

Very creative shit there, you have talent for expressing your thoughts. I've written a peice of poetry or two myself, but I get discouraged when it starts sounding too damn "poetic" (aka, fruity, gay, what else?), or when I can't find good analagies and metaphores to indirectly explain things.

Highly impressive work. #65+++

post it, i give back my thoughts of your work, even if it is good or bad, the whole point is to see what people think

It was a personal poem I wrote to my gf to explain I perdiciment I was in concerning our rel... wouldnt I get a good flaiming here, using such word combinations as "my love" I'd like some feedback nonetheless, perhaps I could PM?

eNathan confuses myself

[[DRuG]NikT]

Man, that's really cool that you have the guts to post all these.. nice work.

I wrote a stack of poems when I was about your age... they all got hidden so nobody could read them.

Very useful for sorting out your feelings when logic is failing.