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Postby [M4D]FULL_METAL on Thu Jul 30, 2009 1:20 am

At first we were friends
Always there for each other
Then we finally met
And nothing had changed

We got to know each other more
Spent along time talking
Then that weekend came

Something had happened
We started feeling closer
Strong bonds were building

That night you said
you think you love me

Weeks have passed
The feeling has come
To the both of us

Confusion standing in the way

Tormenting us

Not knowing what to do
You have never had
This problem

Torment again

You just don't want to hurt
Or get hurt

Tormented

To act rash
Is not what is necessary

Think with you heart
As will i

To help rid of this torment

I would just want to tell you

I love you
Last edited by [M4D]FULL_METAL on Thu Jul 30, 2009 6:31 pm, edited 1 time in total.
I am not an ordinary alchemist
The cycle of life only goes one direction, not even alchemy can change that.
It's been a good while since I've killed anyone, I kinda miss it. Ya wanna watch?
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Re: Tormanted

Postby sandman on Thu Jul 30, 2009 3:32 am

i like it
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Re: Tormanted

Postby [M4D]FULL_METAL on Thu Jul 30, 2009 2:11 pm

so far, out of everywhere i posted, you are one of the only one who has commented
I am not an ordinary alchemist
The cycle of life only goes one direction, not even alchemy can change that.
It's been a good while since I've killed anyone, I kinda miss it. Ya wanna watch?
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Re: Tormanted

Postby [DRuG]NikT on Thu Jul 30, 2009 7:54 pm

Yeh that one is pretty rokkin.

I still think poetry is wayyy too personal to parade in public tho - I reckon it's kinda weird to share... my poems are well hidden, and shared with nobody - my main aim of keeping them is as psychological postcards to myself in the future.

Respekt.


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