my stuff

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It was a personal poem I wrote to my gf to explain I perdiciment I was in concerning our rel... wouldnt I get a good flaiming here, using such word combinations as "my love" I'd like some feedback nonetheless, perhaps I could PM?

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well pm me if u want to, but i still suggest posting it to everyone

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for my full list of stuff that i have posted on another site, here is the link

http://hendo666.deviantart.com/

i got introduced to this site 3 years ago now, its a great place for encouragement from other artist, and a great place to find pics and shit, once i get photoshop again, i will put up some of my pics, and i may write a story to go on there aswell, hope you all enjoy

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this i just made, its 0207am, and i couldnt rest until a made this

Skye/Pineapple

we first met at work one day
we didnt have much to say
we got to know each other after a while
i gave you the nick of pineapple a long time ago now
it still pisses you off, like WOW

but, that fruit seems to suit you
as you are as sweet as it to
like a pineapple, you can be sour
but, we you just need some one to talk with ya

you have always been a good friend of mine
even though i do not see you all the time
we keep in touch alot
during the days that it has been hot

i hate when you have had trouble
if i could, i would be there in a double
friends is what you need
to talk things over when you are most in deed

dont forget im always there to help
usually just a phone call away
i wish we could meet up and spend some time together one day
it would make me feel like yelling, YAY

i leave with this to say
never forget, i will always be there for you
and will always contact you within the same day


this is for my friend i use to work with, as i have things like this for a few other people i know, i decided to make one for her, as i think there is something between us, not to sure

give me some criticism about it please, i can then work better